Learning Through Critiques: A Scribophile Review

Hey all,

It’s good to be back here. I think it’s nice to post when I feel moved to do so. My intention with this blog was to always just post about my writing and journey to publishing. I’ve never been great at Journaling, but I never really talked about my writing community and how I got eyes on my work before my agent and editor ever did. Seems like a fine time to start now.

Years ago, back in my dorm room, my sister came across this site called Scribophile. She was looking for a place to workshop her writing and had been looking into it for a while. She joined and shortly after I joined after seeing that it was helping her.

So what is Scribophile? Well, good friends, Scribophile is a writing community that allows you to post work based off of a karma system. And the way in which you get karma is to critique others work.

Now you might be thinking that’s not for me. I don’t have time for that. I couldnโ€™t possibly critique another writer’s hard work. Honestly, though it takes a while to adjust to, it’s a great system. By switching your lense from your work to help someone’s else’s you become a better writer yourself. And it’s fair. You scratch someone’s back, they scratch yours.

But the best part for me is the friends I’ve made. Scribophile is a vast place so to speak, but once you connect with your locals, the people who stick with your work and build that relationship, the site becomes so much more useful. I even thanked my closest friends in Turning‘s acknowledgements. I really could not have wrote Turning without Scribophile. In fact my first drafts were workshopped on there.

For me it was helpful to comb through each chapter, and within that chapter critiques and comments left by multiple people. It allowed me to cross reference changes in my other documents. I could message and join specialized groups for practically any subject regarding Turning I wrote about. Several of my earlier sensitivity readers came from a group for people with a range of disabilities.

Whether you’re trying to become traditionally published, self published, or simply just want to share your writing and make it better, Scribophile has a place for you. It’s not all business. There are also writing contests with various themes and prizes. Some cash prizes, some great karma prizes. The comtaderie is great. In my early days I enjoyed the contests to get my juices flowing etc. It can be nice to step away from the novel, short story or poem you’re working on.

Did I mention Scribophile isn’t just for novelist or short story writers? Well, it’s not. Pretty much every type of writing is represented on scribophile. I think it’s nice to interact with writers who aren’t necessarily in the same boat. You learn a lot and there’s ton of non-related writing to chat about too.

As I’m reflecting on my six years of being apart of Scribophile, it makes me smile. I can go back to all the writing I’ve ever posted, and reflect on where I was as a writer back then. I just wanted to write, and learn more about my voice and style. I’ve learned so much about not only critiquing my own work, but how to successfully and kindly go about doing the same for someone else. Friends were made. Stories have been published. It doesn’t get much better than that.

See ya,

Joy

A Blurb For Turning

Sometimes I wonder if I should keep blogging because it is so sporadic and I never know what to say. That being said I think a blurb is a perfect thing to blog about.

The whole concept of blurbing was a bit hazy to me. And then there is the possibility that a blurb won’t happen. For me it did and I’d like to share what the brilliant Dana L. Davis wrote for Turning.

Before I get to the sharing though, I just want to say since her debut Tiffany Sly Lives Here Now, I’ve been hooked on her writing. There’s something so relatable about Dana’s stories and of course it’s YA contemporary, my favorite age and genre to read and write. I was completely honored to receive such kind words from an author I admire. Me and Turning are so grateful and humbled by this whole publishing experience and all that comes with it. Did I mention I’m a fan of her as an actor too?

“A Supreme, emotional tour de force that establishes Joy L. Smith as a major talent to watch. TURNING is engrossing, and deeply moving.” Dana L. Davis.

Those are her words! Not mine! I can’t thank Dana enough.

I hope to have more things to post soon! Release date is March 1st and it couldn’t be steaming into the station faster.

Bye for now,

Joy

Publishing Update on TURNING

Hi all!

This seems like a big update to blog about. Turning is available for pre-order! I feel all sorts of actual factual now. Little old me with my isbn number and publishing date and all these pre-order links.

It would mean a lot if you pre-order. If you love YA filled:

  • Black Girl Magic
  • Ballet
  • Complex family dynamics
  • Relationship drama
  • Healing(emotional) journey
  • Disability representation

Then Turning is the book for you.

So here’s the good stuff. The cover was directed by Krista Vossen and illustrated by Talia Skyles. I was in complete and utter shock at the cover when I saw it. I mean it’s so beautiful. Genie looks stunning yet tragic. I can’t believe I’m so lucky to have such a striking cover for a debut book!

It was important to me that Genie’s disability was known from the cover, and to have her falling through her wheelchair wheel is just genius, with her tutu fluffing out as well. The ribbons are my favorite part! Gosh, I just love this cover so much. I want it everywhere!

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

Amazing!

We’re almost there! March 1st is only 8 months away!

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

My New Book Deal

Wow, wow, wow!!!

I waited such a long time to be able to say this on this blog, but I have a book deal. Here it is!

I can’t believe it!

This publishing journey was over 2.5 years. That’s how long this book was on submission, and for others going through it, I know it can be hard to wait. All I can say is things happen in their own time. And I’m so glad it happened now because I am with the most perfect house and editor for TURNING.

All I could do was thank my agent Saba for her patience and expertise, because it truly is a long process. The work that comes after signing the contract is hard, but it will be so worth it. I’m already excited to share these words with everyone.

So if you like stories of:

  • Black Girl Magic
  • Black ballerinas
  • Messy family dynamics
  • Great friendships
  • Messy friendships
  • Secrets
  • Disability representation

This book is for you. I can’t wait to blog about the journey of TURNING from Book cover to launch day. Follow me on Twitter @JoyJoyWrites for more book updates or just good ol theater talk.

Excitedly,

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

Interview with Joy L. Smith

Joy L. Smith is an up and coming YA novelist. She writes characters as diverse as they are powerful and inspiringโ€“Joy is one incredible human bean. You can find her on twitter @JoyJoyWrites.   What characters and themes do you like to write about and what inspires them? I think the main thing about the [โ€ฆ]

Interview with Joy L. Smith

Sonora was kind enough to pick my brain on my writing and inspiration. I had so much fun answering the questions. I feel like if I were being asked these questions in person I would jusy have ellipses, but it was nice to be able to think not so much on the spot about my process and my favortie part of writing. The characters.

Here’s to more interviews in the future!

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

Quarantine Reads Pt 2.

I’ve recently moved which means I’ve recently gotten a new bookshelf, which means I’ve been reading quite a bit. My sister and I have made it a habit to grab a book, a snack and start turning pages. It’s very relaxing and we often listen to our vinyls and music as we dive into the world of these characters.

So far I’ve read:

  • Clap When You Land- Elizabeth Acevedo
  • With the Fire On High- Elizabeth Acevedo
  • The Voting Booth- Brandy Colbert
  • On the Come Up- Angie Thomas
  • Full Disclosure- Camryn Garrett

There’s so much to like about each book. I’ll highlight what makes them all unique.

Clap When You Land- Written in typical stunning verses of Elizabeth Acevedo. It’s filled with colorful language that almost makes you forget that a tragedy brings two sisters together. Sisters! Who doesn’t love a story about sisters especially when it’s done in dual POV? Liz has a way of making you root for her characters. She’s a true wordsmith. Her prose brings everything to life. There’s like a beating heart in her stories.

With the Fire on High– Again Elizabeth Acevedo does what she does best. Although not in verse her story of a teen mother who loves to cook hit my heart. This story smelled GOOD. I was completely invested in the life of Emoni. I was ready to open my own wallet that’s how sucked in I was.

The Voting Booth- Told in the span of one day Brandy Colbert gives us story that I never thought about. First voters. It was political without being political. There was conversations that I would’ve loved to have open to me as a first time voter. I was genuinely stressed which I think was the point of this romance. That’s the thing. Voting should be simple and easy. But it isn’t, but loving this book was.

On the Come Up by Angie Thomas reminded me of how I wanted to be a rapper when I was a kid, and for sure didn’t have that It factor. I’m so used to listening to my showtunes and Oldies that this book reminded me I grew up on Hip Hop. And the rhymes were lit and the love story had me swooning and blushing. Such a fun read with so many messages about the image you put out there. Angie is good for weaving in social justice with every day life.

Full Disclosure by Camryn Garrett stands out for being written by a teenager. That was a first for me. Also the subject matter of HIV that isn’t a time piece or subject to a gay man. So important. And I loved of course the musical theater tidbits as a certified theater nerd myself. There’s a lot to unpack in this story, but the driving force for me is that it shined a light on a group of society that is often overlooked. The children born with HIV and how they navigate not only their health but the stigma and social pressure of dating and disclosing.

Reading was one of my favorite pastimes that got taken over by other pressures of life, so getting back into it makes me so giddy and amped to write a book that will make someone else feel the way that I do when I read. That being said I have so much room on my new shelves so I need to get on adding to them.

Happy reading,

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

Quarantine Reads

Long time no visit to this blog. This blog is super dusty and full of cobwebs, but that just adds character.

Soooooo what have I been up to this quarantine? Working luckily. There was a time where furlough was winking at me, but I’ve been safe and healthy and working from home, which as a teacher has been very eye opening for my inaugural full time teaching year.

While I’ve been home I’ve been ordering and reading a lot books! Being at home has really left a lot of time for me to read more than I had, had the time.

Here’s what I’ve read so far:

  • The New David Espinoza by Fred Aceves. A YA book of toxic masculinity and body dysmorphia from a writing buddy. I got a shout out in the author’s note! It was a quick important own voices book that I think is not covered in YA a lot from the male perspective.
  • Such A Fun Age by Kiley Reid. I don’t read Adult fiction much, but wow when I do I am typically blown away. This book is special because unlike a lot of Adult novels I read I actually saw myself in the main character. She was mid twenties and just wanting to live her life and make her money babysitting when she gets profiled by a security guard thinking she kidnapped the child she’s paid to watch. It was honest and real and relatable and I loved the voice so much. I will always recommend it.
  • When the Stars Lead To You by Ronni Davis. A YA novel of a summer love that blossomed staring a Biracial protagonist who dreams of working with stars. This book touched on mental health a lot which is always great in YA, as well as social class and how it gets tricky when you’re dating someone with money. It’s a perfect beach read.
  • The Only Black Girls in Town by Brandy Colbert. Brandy is my favorite YA author, and her debut middle grade about a Black girl who gets a neighbor who looks like her in her small beach town is monumental. I love that there was a hint of mystery in the story, and the easy, age appropriate but not watered down talk about race is so needed in middle grade and there was no need to add huge trauma and black pain. Brandy has a way of seamlessly adding in diversity with gay parents and surrogacy and friendships. It’s a must read MG novel.

I’ve enjoyed all the books I’ve read so far. Hope to pick up some more books soon(in the middle of With the Fire On High), but I’ve been focusing on my writing when I’m not reading picture books. I think I’ll post a blog of my favorite picture books.

What books have you all been reading during quarantine?

Stay safe,

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

I Shot For The Stars

Hellooooo,

I feel like there should be an echo for this blog. It’s safe to say that blogging is not my strongest feature, even about something that is a big part of my life like writing and reading and theater. I was looking over my goals for the new year and so ashamed that most of what’s on it has not been accomplished. That’s okay though, I have 6 more months until the new year.

So instead of completely scrapping said ideas, I do want to amend them a bit. For one I hope to have a draft of at least one if my WIPs done by the end of August. I have yet to start my MG WIP, but that’s because I have so many YAs that take over my brain space. And as far as my adult novel goes it pretty much follows the reason I don’t have a MG.

I wish I was better at this blogging thing though. If I’m not working on my writing, I’m watching TV or a movie and working so that’s my time mostly. When I did book reviews I was more consistent. Should I do that again? I have read a lot of books since my last review. I’m sure I could back log a lot of bookish thoughts.

Books in my queue:

  • With the Fire On High
  • An Epic Love Story
  • On the Come Up

I’m sure there are others I’m missing.

I doubt any followers of mine were missing me. So if you’re out there. Hey, again, I’ll try to be more active on this blog.

Later,

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚

Goals

I was never one to set goals for the new year. This year I will try. There are so many goals I have for myself both writerly and personally. So here goes. First up is the writerly ones in no particular order:

  • Sell a book. It looks so simple but it’s not, and it’s a goal I know I can make this year.
  • Finish WIP. I have 2 in the queue that are close to being done. I love both of them dearly. They need a lot of work, but with focus I can get them to a good place.
  • Work on my craft. I can do better. I can write better.
  • Start MG project. I’ve been wanting to branch into writing for younger readers and never found the voice. This is the year I’m going to make a stronger effort.
  • Start Adult project. As much as I love writing YA I would like to start an adult novel as well. Test the waters.
  • Read more adult fiction. I love reading YA but I would like to expand my collection.

I feel good about this year and what I can accomplish. So if you care to find me…

Look to the western sky,

Joy ๐Ÿ™‚